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Write A Powerful Book Introduction With These 5 Must-Do Steps + Examples

The first thing you need to know is this: the introduction of a book is, at its essence, a sales letter from you (the author)  to your ideal reader. 

The goal isn’t to dazzle them with your writing skills but to convince them your book is well worth their time. 

By the time we’re done, you’ll know how to write a book introduction that grabs the interest of readers. 

We’ll also see some of the best book introduction examples ever written. 

Let’s dive in!

What Is An Introduction in a Book and Why Have One? 

What should be in the intro to a book , how long should a book introduction be , 1. immediately engage your reader with a story. , 2. clearly illustrate “how it is.” , 3. highlight “what could be” and how., 4. show your credentials. , 5. give your reader a brief outline of your book. .

The introduction of a novel or nonfiction book is where you sell the idea that your book, more than anything similar to it, represents the best use of your reader’s time. 

With nonfiction, you do this by identifying your reader’s problem and showing that you understand. As early as possible in your intro, you want them to think, “This person really knows about a problem I have — and has solved in a way I haven’t tried yet.” 

The introduction is where you convince your reader that your book is just what they need to solve a problem that has been bothering them or standing in their way. 

You and your book are the solutions they’ve been looking for. 

Every introduction is different, but the most effective intros share the following elements: 

  • The hook — where you grab the reader and give them a reason to keep reading
  • Relatable description of a problem — ideally through a story
  • Believable and inspiring revelation of a solution — also via storytelling
  • Just enough mystery to keep your reader wondering (and reading) 
  • Outline of the book — highlighting its main selling points

It’s also important to know what not to put in your introduction. The main thing to remember is eliminating anything that hasn’t earned its place. 

You want no wasted words. No fluff. Nothing that doesn’t contribute to the desired effect. 

The effect, of course, is a reader’s conviction that reading your book will make their life so much better that they must read it.  

The length of your introduction will depend on the following factors: 

  • The length of your book (since you’ll offer a brief outline in your intro); 
  • The need for background information to make your book’s purpose clear;
  • The popularity of your book’s subject. 

As already mentioned, it’s important not to make your introduction any longer than it needs to be. Get your reader hooked, and then get them right to the good stuff. 

How to Write a Book Introduction: 5 Must-Do Steps with Examples 

You can write an outstanding book introduction in five simple steps, each of which we’ll explore below, using some of the best introduction examples to illustrate each one. 

The best way to hook your reader is with a story illustrating a problem they have using a relatable character . 

This character can be a real person whose name you’ve changed to protect their identity. Or it can be an avatar of a real person or a set of people with a similar story. 

The important thing is to make sure this character is believable. Make it someone your ideal reader can easily relate to and even care about (“They’re like me!”). 

When you show how the solution improved their lives, your readers can see themselves in that person. They can believe that if the solution worked for the person in your story, it would work for them. 

Think about the best introductions you’ve ever read. How did the author draw you in? 

The chances are good that they told you a story. They introduced you to a character you could relate to. The more you learned about them, the more you saw yourself in them and wanted to believe your life would get better from reading that book. 

You read about the happy outcome and felt hope that you would experience the same. 

Example from David and Goliath: Underdogs, Misfits, and the Art of Battling Giants by Malcolm Gladwell

“…He was a giant, six foot nine at least, wearing a bronze helmet and full body armor. He carried a javelin, a spear, and a sword. An attendant preceded him, carrying a shield. The giant faced the Israelites and shouted out, “Choose you a man and let him come down to me! If he prevail in battle against me and strike me down, we shall be slaves to you. But if I prevail and strike him down, you will be slaves to us and serve us.

“In the Israelite camp, no one moved. Who could win against such a terrifying opponent? Then a shepherd boy who had come down from Bethlehem to bring food to his brothers stepped forward and volunteered. Saul objected: “You cannot go against this Philistine and do battle with him, for you are a lad and he is a man of war from his youth.” But the shepherd was adamant. He had faced more ferocious opponents than this, he argued. “When the lion or the bear would come and carry off a sheep from the herd,” he told Saul, “I would go after him and strike him down and rescue it from his clutches.” Saul had no other options. He relented, and the shepherd boy ran down the hill toward the giant standing in the valley. “Come to me that I may give your flesh to the birds of the heavens and the beasts of the field,” the giant cried out when he saw his opponent approaching. Thus began one of history’s most famous battles. The giant’s name was Goliath. The shepherd boy’s name was David.” 

You want them to know you see “how it is.” You’re intimately familiar with a problem they share, and you know exactly how awful that problem it can be. 

Intimate knowledge involves particulars, not just a hazy, general idea. On the other hand, you don’t want to include less relatable details and risk alienating your reader. 

One way to approach this is to write about a character modeled after yourself. If you’ve had the problem, you know it as well as your ideal reader . You’ve gained insights into this problem. 

You lived with it and suffered from it, but it didn’t beat you. You triumphed, and you want your reader to experience the same victory and the benefits of the solution you discovered. 

Write this story as if you were writing about yourself from someone else’s perspective. 

Start with the problem and clarify that the character you speak about really knows what it’s like to live with that problem. Show them the cost. 

Example from  Speed Reading; Learn to Read a 200+ Page Book in 1 Hour by Kam Knight

“The sheer volume of information the eyes can take in at any moment is incomprehensible. Look around and take note of everything you see. If outside, notice the trees, cars, people, and everything in between. If, sitting at a desk, take note of the pens, paper, notebook, and all the other material in front of you. 

“The mind processes these objects so fast you’re not aware of the processing happen. You simply move your eyes in a direction, and they instantaneously detect and understand what is there.

“When we read, however, things are not as smooth and fluid. It takes time and effort to process words and the meaning conveyed by those words. For many, reading is a demanding activity that consumes a lot of mental energy. For some, it is so demanding, they avoid reading altogether.

“So, the question is, why can’t we process text the same way we process other things in our environment? 

“The truth is we can! …. “ 

You want your reader to see “how it can be” if they apply the solution you offer them in your book. Now that you’ve convinced them you know the problem at least as well as they do, it’s time to 

Show your reader they’re not stuck with “how it is” now. They can be like the example character in your story who applied the solution and saw their life change dramatically for the better. 

You also want them to believe that, just by reading your book, they can easily apply the solution themselves and see the benefits right away. You also want them to think, “This is totally doable for me.” 

No solution, however impressive the results, will draw them in if they don’t see themselves using it or sticking to it. People like solutions that are easy and life-changing. 

The easier you make it sound to start the solution and to stick with it, the more likely your readers are to keep reading — all the way to the end of your book . 

You want them excited about the benefits you describe in your book’s introduction. And you want them hungry to learn more. 

Example from To-Do List Formula: A Stress-Free Guide to Creating To-Do Lists That Work! by Damon Zahariades: 

“…If you’re feeling overwhelmed, I recommend you read this book from beginning to end. You’ll learn why your current approach to task management is failing. You’ll also discover the changes you need to make to meet your deadlines, lower your stress, and find more joy in your daily experience. 

“By the time you finish reading To-Do List Formula: A Stress Free Guide… you’ll know how to create task lists that do more than just display action items. They’ll actually help you get things done. More to the point, they’ll help you get the important things done. That could mean the difference between struggling with chronic stress and self-guilt and enjoying a relaxed, pressure-free workweek.

“You’re about to learn a system that will revolutionize how you approach your work, both at the office and at home.”  

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Give your reader a reason to believe you’re qualified to discuss the problem in-depth and help them apply the solution to get the best possible results. 

So, share something about yourself to build your reader’s confidence in you. 

What experience do you have related to the problem and solution you present in your book? How did you gain the knowledge you have, and why does it matter? What makes you the best person to guide them to an effective long-term solution to this problem? 

You’re writing this book because you believe you’re uniquely well suited to discussing this problem and the particular solution you’re offering. You probably have something in your background that would enhance your credibility in your reader’s eyes. 

Use that. Whether you learned something the hard way, grew up with a rare advantage (or disadvantage), or were fortunate enough to interview someone with an incredible story, share that with your reader. 

If it makes you any better qualified to write this book, it’s worth mentioning. 

Example from The Girls of Atomic City: The Untold Story of the Women Who Helped Win World War II by Denise Kiernan: 

“A number of these women—and men—still live in Oak Ridge, Tennessee today. I have had the fascinating and humbling privilege of meeting them, interviewing them, laughing and crying with them, and hearing firsthand their tales of life in a secret city while working on a project whose objective was largely kept from them. Over the years, they have graciously given me their time and suffered through repeated questions and what must have seemed like insane requests to recall moments from their day-to-day activities roughly 70 years ago… I did not only learn about life on the Manhattan Project. I also found myself taken aback by their sense of adventure and  independence, their humility, and their dedication to the preservation of history…. “

While it might seem unnecessary since your introduction comes shortly after your table of contents , great introductions often provide at least a rough outline of the book to give the reader an idea of what to expect and to get them excited about what’s coming up next. 

If your book is divided into parts , here’s a good place to point that out and explain why. 

The outline part of your introduction acts as a tour guide to the rest of your book, pointing out the main attractions at each stop. You want your reader to feel confident that the book has all the information they need to solve the problem you’ve just described. 

Do this right, and your reader will be only too ready to turn the page and start Chapter One. 

Don’t expect your reader to flip back to the table of contents for reassurance that you’ve covered the essentials. They probably won’t. 

Picture a waiter at a nice restaurant describing the night’s special. By the time they’re done, if the special is to your taste, you’re salivating at the sensory details and ready to dive in as soon as the plate hits the table. 

It’s like that. 

Example from The Power of Habit by Charles Duhigg: 

“This book is divided into three parts. The first section focuses on how habits emerge within individual lives …

The second part examines the habits of successful companies and organizations …

The third part looks at the habits of societies …

Each chapter revolves around a central argument: Habits can be changed, if we understand how they work.”

Now that you know how to write an introduction for your book, we hope your mind is buzzing with ideas. Take a moment to jot some of them down without editing yourself (that comes later). 

You can also use what you’ve learned here to level up an introduction for a book you’ve already published. 

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What an Introduction Should Do

What an introduction should not do, the formula for an introduction, example introduction outline, why to write your intro last, how to outline your book introduction.

how to write a book introduction that grabs the interest of readers

You know why most readers—probably including you—skip book introductions?

Because most authors think the purpose of the introduction is to explain everything they will talk about in the book.

That is boring and wrong.

The purpose of a good introduction is to engage the reader and get them to read the book .

Just because someone is reading an introduction does not mean they are going to finish the book . The thing that scares people off of books is not the price—it’s the commitment of time. People don’t care about $10. They care about spending their time on something that is interesting and engaging to them.

That is the job of the introduction: prove to the reader this book is worth reading. A well done introduction grabs the reader and compels them to keep reading. It pulls them through and makes them excited to start the content, because the introduction has answered the most important question the reader has:

“Why should I read this book?”

  • Get the reader immediately interested in the book
  • Clearly lay out the pain the reader is facing
  • Paint a picture of a better future or a benefit the reader can get
  • Outline briefly what the reader will learn in the book
  • Explain why the author is the expert and authority on this subject
  • Get the reader committed to reading the book
  • Be a summary of the book
  • Try to tell the whole story of something that is already in the book
  • Tell the author’s whole life story
  • Tediously explain exactly what is coming in the book
  • Have a meandering story that the reader doesn’t care about
  • Have too much background
  • Be too long
  • Start at the beginning of the author’s life
  • Have too much autobiography
  • Be entirely about the author and what they want to talk about

The Best Introductions are Formulaic

This is the thing to know about introductions: there is a formula to effective ones, and you should follow it.

Even though it may not seem like there’s a formula, there is one, and if you don’t stick to it, then your readers will feel it, and be upset—even if they don’t know why.

You can be very creative within the boundaries of the formula, but follow the formula and your introduction will work well.

A good introduction is like an interesting sales pitch, not a dry and boring informational piece. Introductions are built from these elements:

  • Hook the reader
  • Tell a story about the reader’s current pain
  • Tell a story about the reader’s potential pleasure
  • Tell them what they’ll learn
  • Describe the author’s background/origin of book
  • Set up the book with a call to action

Part 1: Hook the reader

An introduction has to hook the reader fast. It should grab them by the lapels and force them to pay attention.

Here are examples of hooks. They start average and then get much better:

“Let’s start with a question: Why do certain groups perform better than other groups?”

“You’ve been told a lie. Everything you know about sugar is wrong.”

“I thought I was going to die.”

“We shot dogs. Not by accident. We did it on purpose, and we called it Operation Scooby. I’m a dog person, so I thought a lot about that.”

These all grab your attention. They make you sit up, take notice, and read the next line.

There is not a specific formula to figuring out your hook. These are the three questions we use to help determine what the hook is:

  • What is the most interesting story or claim in the book?
  • What sentence or fact makes people sit up and take notice?
  • What is the intended audience going to care about the most, or be most interested in or shocked by?

Some other things to think about when finding your hook:

  • A great hook is counterintuitive, and it violates expectations or reverses
  • It’s not going to be the first story you think of
  • It’s the story people always ask you about
  • It is never the story that makes you look the best

Often the hook is an anecdote. One powerful way to write an anecdotal hook well is to use the “cinematic” technique: tell it as if you are describing a scene in a movie. At its core, the hook makes the reader sit up and take notice.

Though the first sentence must be effective, the rest of the page and initial story must do the same thing.

An attention-grabbing sentence needs to lead into something that keeps them—a short story, example, statistic, or historical context that introduces the subject in a way that is interesting and exciting—and will engage the reader and compel them to read more, and lead them into the rest of the material.

Part 2: Tell stories about the reader’s current pain

Once you have the reader’s attention with the hook, the introduction next answers the implicit reader question: “Why do I care?”

Basically, what’s the reason the reader went to the bookstore? What problem were they looking to solve?

This is not about giving the reader simple information. It’s not enough to list nothing but boring facts and figures. No one pays attention to that.

People pay attention to stories, especially stories that resonate with their problems, pain, and conflicts. Once they are in touch with those pain points, then they want to hear about solutions that provide relief and pleasure, and maybe even take them somewhere new in their life.

This ties directly into the audience section  you wrote in your positioning. You should know your reader’s pain precisely, because you’ve already told that story once, at least in the abstract. The story or stories in the introduction should dive deep and describe the massive pain the reader is suffering by not taking the advice or lessons in your book. Pain induces action.

Part 3: Tell stories about the reader’s potential pleasure

Once you’ve appealed to the reader’s pain point, then you should tell a story that describes the pleasure that comes from taking the action. Show them why the results are so amazing and that the goal is worth the pain.

Again, this ties into your audience positioning—you already have this story, you did it in your audience section. Dive deep into it and provide more specifics.

Part 4: Tell them what they’ll learn

Once you’ve laid out the pain and pleasure stories and the reader understands what’s at stake for them by reading this book, then you need to explain exactly how you are going to help them solve their pain and get to their pleasure.

Make sure this is so clear and simple that even a seventh grader could understand. It should be as basic as, “I am going to show you precisely how to do this. I’ll walk you through, step by step by step, until you have mastered everything necessary to get your results.”

Part 5: Describe your background/origin of book

Once you’ve hooked the reader, appealed to their pain, and shown them the benefit they can have if they overcome it, now it’s time to explain who you are, why you wrote the book, and why the reader should trust what you have to say.

Essentially, you’ll establish your authority to be their guide, and contextualize the book for them.

The best way to do this again, is to tell a story. Why did you write this book? Why does this subject matter to you? How did you learn enough to be in a position to teach what you know to people? Why are you qualified—even uniquely qualified—to write this book? Why should the reader credit what you have to say?

This is where you can talk about your hero’s journey story—what it took for you to get to this place—because this is where the reader is wondering why they should trust you. After all, if you are going to help them by teaching them so much, they need to know why they should listen to you.

But, and this is very important: remember that the reader doesn’t care about you . They only care about you and your story insofar as it applies to the book and to your expertise. Do not give them an autobiography. Just enough about you to know that they should listen is all it takes.

Part 6: What the book is and is not

This is an optional part of the intro, but many authors like to put this in. By telling the reader what the book is and is not, it sets the right expectations in the beginning. You can do this very simply, mainly by stating what you will not be, and the things they will not get out of it.

Underselling here, just a little, works great.

Part 7: Segue to first chapter

Once you have done all of this, then all that is left is a simple transition to get the reader ready to dive in and start engaging the book.

I know this all seems like a lot, so here is an example intro to help you see how it ties together:

Most authors find the introduction to be the hardest part of the book to write, and that’s why we recommend authors outline it last.

Why is it hardest and better when it’s done last? I tell authors we outline the intro last because we want it to hit hard and entice, and it’s easier to be more effective in that when we already have a specific understanding of the full scope and key messaging of the book.

You can’t effectively tease something if you don’t fully understand how it’s going to play out in practice.

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Readers might be intrigued by a book standing in the middle of a bookstore lined with shiny artwork. But what will make them flip through the pages after they’ve picked it up? And what will lead them to the cashier to make a commitment to this one book out of countless others? The answer lies in the ‘book introduction’. That’s where the real magic happens: where the author hooks the reader and captures their thoughts, making them feel like what they’re about to read is going to change their life in some way. 

In this article, we are going to cover the purpose of book introductions; the simple steps you can take to write a great one for your book (whether it’s for a work of fiction or nonfiction); and finally, we’ll share some examples by authors who just nailed the assignment!

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In this article :

  • What is a book introduction exactly?
  • Why you need a book introduction
  • How to write a book introduction that people will actually read
  • Fiction book introduction checklist (downloadable)
  • Non-fiction book introduction checklist (downloadable)
  • Examples of great book introductions (fiction and non-fiction)

Forward VS Preface Vs Introduction

There are many different elements that make up the “ front matter ” of a book, or the pages preceding the body. We’ve all come across introductions, forewords, and prefaces, and sometimes a book can have a mix of all three. So first, let’s establish the differences between them.

Forewords are usually not written by the author or editor, but rather by someone who is knowledgeable on the book’s subject—preferably a “celebrity” in the field. Forewords represent a way for authors to earn readers’ trust by having someone well-established vouch for these authors and their work. And usually, they are no more than a couple of pages long— just like a letter of reference . 

A preface provides a general overview of a book and is written by the author or editor. It touches upon the author’s reasons for writing the book, how it is written, and why the author is an expert on the subject. What it doesn’t do, however, is offer a close examination of the book’s contents. Think of a preface as the “why” and “how” of a work, but not the “what.” 

Introduction

A book’s introduction, on the other hand, can provide the same overview that a preface does, while also discussing and adding to the subject of the book. It is written by the author and usually offers readers an outline of the book’s contents, letting the readers know what’s to come. In effect, it acts as the “hook”—a  justification for why readers should turn to the first chapter, and also why they should make it all the way to the end. 

Forward VS Preface Vs Introduction

The Purpose of Book Introductions

Before we get into how to write a fantastic book introduction, here are five glorious things that a well-written introduction can do for you:

1. Getting Readers Hooked

Has your book been picked up at a bookstore? Great! The potential buyer is now scanning the first paragraph of your introduction. They’re about to keep flipping through the pages, when, slowly, they pause. Something in that paragraph has caught their attention and they’re now putting down their bag for a minute. That’s the hook . 

2. Convincing Them to Carry On

Not only will a good introduction convince the reader to turn to the next chapter, but it will also give them a sense of wanting to know what’s to come much later on. With the right amount of show-and-tell, your introduction will persuade them that this book is one they should not put away till the end. 

3. Increasing Book Sales

The book industry is a competitive one, and it’s no secret that it takes a lot to market and sell a book. But whether you have a publishing contract or are planning to self-publish , your introduction is one of the most vital sales tools your book will have. As the author, you know what your work has to offer, and with a good introduction, your readers will too.

4. Providing a Bite-Sized Version of Your Work

Reading a book—especially a novel or any other type of long-form work—is an investment on the reader’s part. The introduction is your chance to clearly summarize hundreds of pages in just a few. 

In this way, you’re offering a “trailer” of your work—a bite-sized version that potential readers can quickly digest in order to make the decision to finish reading your book. 

5. Displaying Your Expertise

It doesn’t matter if you’re writing about a niche subject or something that’s been written about thousands of times; either way, you have to convince your readers that you know what you are talking about.

The introduction is a chance to showcase your talents, whether it’s by writing that perfect opening to your mystery novel, or by outlining the research methodology for your book on ancient Egyptian architecture. 

How to Write a Book Introduction 

Now that you know how important a book introduction is, it’s time to know how it’s done. In this section, we will provide a step-by-step guide on how to nail yours, and also give you some more specific pointers on how to write introductions for works of fiction and non-fiction. 

Step 1: Don’t Worry about Its Length

It’s normal to wonder if there’s a word limit you should stick to when writing your introduction. The short answer is: there isn’t one. The length of an introduction entirely depends on your subject matter. In other words, how much does the reader need to know about your topic before being convinced to make that purchase?

So instead of trying to fit your introduction into a set number of pages, make a list of the important points a potential reader should know so they would continue reading your book. Using that as your guide, you’ll be able to naturally determine the appropriate length of your introduction as you write it.

Step 2: Choose Your Reader Wisely

Choosing your reader may sound strange, but before an author begins writing, he/she will usually have an ideal reader persona in mind. This reader is one who is interested in your subject, and who will therefore appreciate the work you have done. 

Before writing your introduction, picture your ideal reader and write to them rather than trying to appeal to a general audience. This will make writing your introduction much easier, as you will be catering it to those who would naturally want to read your work.

Step 3: Introduce Your Subject Matter

A good introduction is like a good sales pitch; it should provide the right amount of information to get others excited and motivated to invest. This means book introductions should be concise and informative while showcasing the work’s subject matter.

Here are three questions to consider: 

  • Why is this topic important? 
  • Why should people read about it now? 
  • What are the main things you promise the reader will take away from this reading experience?

Step 4: Don’t Be Afraid to Boast a Little

The introduction is not the place for you to be humble about your experiences and expertise. Of course, this doesn’t mean you should use it just to show off and sing your own praises either. Instead, you have to find the right balance between making yourself relatable to your readers, while simultaneously demonstrating that you are an authority on your subject. 

Use the introduction to show readers that you’re passionate about your topic, and list the ways in which you bring a unique edge to it. If done correctly, the introduction would be the first step to getting readers to trust you as an author. 

Step 5: Think about Your “Hook”

Now that you have your ideal reader, outline, and expertise all down, it’s time to think about your introduction’s opening paragraph. How are you going to get that reader to pause in the middle of the bookstore? How will you get them to instantly stop skimming and start carefully reading instead? 

That’s where your “hook” comes in. Whether you’re writing a romance novel or a history book, you need to give readers an introduction with some kind of an intriguing story—one that will get them to ask: “And then what happens next?” 

Step 6: Direct Readers to Continue 

So far you’ve nailed the opening and the core of your introduction, and your reader is looking forward to moving on to the next page. Great work. Now it’s time to wrap up your introduction in a way that prompts readers to get to the end of the book. 

How do you do that? You give them a promise that there is a golden nugget to be found later on—whether that promise is explicit or not depends on the type of work you’ve written. 

For example, if you’re writing a work of non-fiction, you can intrigue your readers by hinting at the conclusions they’ll attain by the end of the book. And if you’re working on an introduction to a novel, you can use foreshadowing to keep readers hungry for the climax that is yet to come. 

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Introduction for Fiction Books Checklist

The steps provided above will work for any type of book introduction. Nevertheless, here are some additional tips that are specific to fiction book introductions. 

For the purpose of this section, we have chosen novels as an example of works of fiction. For each tip, we’ve put together a list of questions for you to check off while writing to make sure your introduction is airtight. 

1. Establishing the Setting and Mood

  • Where and in what time period is the novel set?
  • Does your introduction give readers a strong sense of this setting ? 
  • Is it clear what the general mood of the story is? (Is it dark? Mysterious? Romantic?)
  • What details did you use in your introduction to convey this mood?

2. Indicating Your Narrator

  • Who is the narrator in your novel? Is it one of the characters? Or are you using a third-person omniscient or third-person limited narrator?
  • What kind of tone does your narrator adopt? 
  • Does your narrator’s voice effectively draw in the reader?

3. Introducing Your Characters

  •  Have you introduced at least one of your main characters in the introduction? 
  • How does your introduction make that character memorable? 

4. Showing or Foreshadowing the Main Conflict

  • Does your introduction hint at the novel’s main conflict ? 
  • Is the conflict “juicy” enough to make readers want to read on? 
  • Does your introduction give the readers a sense of how the conflict will affect the main character(s)?

5. Exhibiting or Hinting at the Main Themes

  • Can the readers attain an overview of the novel’s potential themes through your introduction?
  • Does the introduction effectively use the literary elements of setting, plot, conflict, and foreshadowing to establish the main themes of the novel?

6. Hooking the Reader

  • Does the introduction leave readers with the question: “What happens next?”

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Introduction for Nonfiction books Checklist

A good nonfiction introduction will aim to capture the reader’s mind just like a good fiction introduction would. Below is a list of tips and questions tailored specifically to suit works of nonfiction. In this case, we’ll use a standard academic monograph as an example.

1. Introducing the Topic

  • Does the introduction dive straight into the book’s main subject matter?
  • Does the reader know what he/she can expect to learn from this book?
  • Is it made clear why this topic is relevant and important?

2. Outlining the Content

  • Does the introduction provide a clear outline of what each chapter will discuss?
  • Does it provide enough information about the book’s research methodology ? 

3. Asserting the Author’s Credibility

  • Does the introduction justify why you as the author are an authority on the subject matter discussed?
  • Is the tone of the introduction assertive but also inviting, such that readers can feel a sense of trust and relatability?

 4. Identifying a Problem

  • Does the introduction present a problem that the readers can relate to? 
  • Does it clearly demonstrate the effects of that problem on our world today?

5. Making a Promise to the Reader

  • Does the introduction motivate readers by making a promise to provide answers throughout the book? 
  • Is this promise crafted in a way that makes readers want to reach the conclusion of the book? 

6. Showing Your Passion

  • Does the introduction effectively convey your passion for your subject matter? 
  • Does it allow readers to see how important the topic is to you?
  • Do you demonstrate a personal connection to your subject matter?

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Book Introduction Examples

You now have all the necessary tools to write that winning introduction. All that’s left now is some inspiration to get you going. Below are four samples from great introductions that are sure to help: two from nonfiction titles, and two from works of fiction. 

On Identity by Amin Maalouf [Nonfiction]

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The very first line of this introduction instantly conveys the author’s frustrated tone : “How many times” has he been asked to pick a side: French or Lebanese? The expressed frustration makes the author appear “human”, relatable. The reader is also immediately acquainted with the author’s problem : Who is he in the midst of all the languages and cultural traditions he has been exposed to over the years? And why must he choose just one “identity” and stick to it?  

Maalouf’s introduction is also riddled with rhetorical questions that engage the reader, allowing them to question their own views, too. “Would I exist more authentically if I cut off a part of myself?” The reader becomes invested in the author’s struggle—probably because Maalouf’s ideal reader is someone who, like him, has questions about their identity in the face of multiculturalism. 

What makes this introduction great is that despite the fact that Maalouf is evidently frustrated, he already has the solution: he is both Lebanese and American, and he is sure of it because “any other answer would be a lie.” The reader, therefore, trusts that Maalouf has already figured it out, and that his book will show exactly how he reached this conclusion. 

Despite Maalouf’s frustration, which is there to mimic the reader’s own feelings of confusion, there is a promise of resolution that is yet to come. And thus the reader wants to carry on. 

And Still the Music Plays by Graham Stokes [Nonfiction]

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The power of this introduction stems from three main elements. Firstly, the author uses the very first line to explicitly state his reason for writing this book; namely, his “increasing wish to say more” about the effects of dementia on people’s lives. 

Secondly, the author gives important background information about dementia and in doing so, sets out the main problem: that neuropathology has failed to explain certain important aspects of the disease. The author then shows how his book aims to provide a solution, which is by adopting a research methodology that focuses on the everyday experiences of people with dementia: “the ‘person-centered’ model.” 

However, Stokes doesn’t get into the details of his method just yet; instead, he appeals to the reader’s sensibilities by adopting an empathetic tone towards his subject matter and making it relatable: “They were like you and me, and then seemingly inexplicably they were struck down.” The author directly addresses his ideal reader , “you,” and hooks them almost as if they don’t have a choice.

Finally, if the author were pitching this book to publishers, he would probably use the last sentence in the introduction’s second paragraph as his tagline : “Extraordinary stories about ordinary people.” Sold!

To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee [Fiction]

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It’s no surprise that Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird has been a part of many school curricula for years. What makes the opening of this novel brilliant is how the author manages to effortlessly throw the reader into the heart of the action . Through a flashback to a single event—Jem’s arm injury—the reader is given plenty of information about the setting (the American South), the narrator (Jem’s younger sister), and so many important characters , including Jem, Atticus, and Boo Radley.

Although it may initially seem overwhelming, the author is not simply rattling off a bunch of character names. Instead, she subtly hints at the mystery behind them. Who are the Ewells, and what role did they play in Jem’s accident? Who is Boo Radley, and what does it mean to have him “come out”? What is the significance of Simon Finch’s paddling up the Alabama river? These are all questions that will run through the reader’s mind, and the only way to get answers is to read on.    

The art here lies in how the author uses the single occurrence of Jem’s accident to neatly tie together a complex story about racial prejudice and injustice. Thus, the reader is told to anticipate the novel’s climax , and to continue reading in order to find out how it happens. 

The Yellow Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins Gilman [Fiction]

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The strength of this short story’s introduction lies in the simple , conversational way in which it reveals a whole lot of information. From the outset, we immediately find out a number of key things: 

  • The setting : The narrator and her husband are spending the summer away at a mansion. 
  • The mood : There is something eerie and mysterious about this place that has been let so cheaply and previously left unoccupied for so long.
  • The conflict : The narrator is unwell and seems to be afraid to voice her thoughts out loud to her husband.

Talk about conciseness! Every word in Gilman’s introduction is packed with meaning and has an intentional purpose. The narrator and her husband’s tense relationship is immediately brought to the reader’s attention via the simple line: “but one expects that in marriage.” It’s almost like the narrator has given up on the entire institution. 

The first-person narration serves to draw readers in, making them feel close to the protagonist and her point of view. Not only that, but the secrecy of the narrator’s writing (“I would not say it to a living soul”) conveys the sense of reading someone’s diary, or perhaps a secret letter, thus immersing the reader in this writer’s world. 

Gilman’s introduction succinctly and masterfully draws readers in, making them already start to empathize with —or at least express interest in—her main character’s story. 

Concluding Thoughts 

It doesn’t matter if you’re working on the next bestselling novel, or on a book about birds of the Middle East—a well-crafted introduction is your book’s golden ticket. It’s a powerful sales tool and a great hook for people to keep reading your book, and now you have all the information you need to use it effectively.

Your ideal reader is out there, and a great introduction will convince them that yours is the book they should be taking home. All you have to do is start writing!

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Write a Clear Book Introduction That Grabs Your Reader

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Salmaan Ahmad

January 23, 2023

If you’re writing a nonfiction book, a book introduction is essential. It offers a summary of what’s ahead. More importantly, it gives the reader a reason to continue reading your book. Here’s how to write a book introduction that will keep them turning the pages.

Why You Need a Book Introduction

In a nonfiction book, the introduction works as a marketing tool for the book. It is directed at the ideal reader of your book, that is, the person who’s turning to your book to learn something new.

Although it should be well written, it doesn’t need to be flowery or overly descriptive. It should be clear and to the point. It serves three purposes:

  • It explains why you wrote the book.
  • It convinces the reader that you’re an expert they can trust.
  • It lets them know the book is worth their time.

Elements of a Book Introduction

Although every introduction is a little different, the best ones share these characteristics. If you’re having trouble writing your introduction, write down this list. Make your way through each element one at a time as you think about your ideal reader.

  • The book’s subject: Why did you write the book? Why does your book stand out among other books that deal with the same subject? Why should someone interested in this topic read your book?
  • Description of a problem or controversy your book addresses: What questions will your book answer? Are there differing opinions about the subject, and where do you stand on that issue?
  • Presentation of a solution: This is the heart of your introduction. Your reader expects a specific solution from your book. If it’s a self-help book, they want a workable plan to solve that problem. If it’s a biography, they want new stories about someone they may already know a lot about. If you’ve written about a social or political issue, they want to know that you’ll present compelling evidence for your viewpoint.
  • Mystery or intrigue: You don’t want to give everything away in the introduction. Tantalize the reader with a promise that they’ll get all the answers they want.
  • Outline of the book: The introduction should summarize the main points of your book. Some writers provide a chapter-by-chapter summary to guide the reader through the book.

A Good Book Introduction Can Boost Your Book Sales

The key to writing a good introduction is to remember that it’s a sales tool. Most novels don’t have introductions because readers already have an idea of what the plot is. They don’t need to slow down and read an introduction because they already know they want to read the book.

In a nonfiction book, however, the reader will read the book introduction before deciding whether they want to continue reading your book. Readers of nonfiction books have a practical approach. They want to know why they should choose your book over the many others on the same subject.

The book introduction is your chance to sell this reader on your book. Typically, you only have a few paragraphs or pages to make your case. Make the most of your opportunity by spending time crafting a sales letter that will make readers stick with you.

Don’t Confuse a Book Introduction with Other Front Matter

Some nonfiction books have pages and pages of front matter before you get to the start of the book. This is especially common in academic books, histories, biographies, and books that deal with contested social issues. The authors of these books spend time preparing the reader for what’s ahead.

What is all this front matter? Here are the usual things you’ll find at the front of a nonfiction book.

Although it looks the same as an introduction, a preface serves a different purpose. It focuses on the reasons you wrote the book. It describes what inspired you to write it, touches on the research you did, and expresses hope that the reader will find it useful or engaging.

The preface should also discuss the reasons the book is a necessary contribution to the subject area. If you’re covering a topic that has been written about extensively, explain why your book stands out and why the world needs it.

A preface does not get into the book’s subject matter the way an introduction does. It doesn’t go into your opinions, perspectives, or arguments. Leave those for the introduction.

You don’t write a foreword for your book. The foreword is written by someone whose name can give your book more credibility. If you’re a first-time writer on a subject or not a recognized expert in the field, a foreword from an expert will help market your book. Their name on your book is like a recommendation to readers.

Length of a Book Introduction

How long should your book introduction be? That’s a question many writers struggle with. The answer is that the length varies on the subject and the complexity of the book.

The introduction for a self-help, how-to, or advice book should be short. Readers of these books want to get straight to the meat of the book, so grab their attention quickly and hold it.

The best way to engage a reader’s attention is with a descriptive story. If you are writing about how to solve a particular problem, start by describing someone who had the same problem and successfully overcame it. Use one or two stories that illustrate this point. It should be a relatable story that makes the reader think, “If they can do it, I can, too.”

Plan for an introduction that ranges from 500 to 1,200 words.

Longer, More Complex Books Need Longer Book Introductions

A nonfiction history or biography should focus on why the book is necessary. There may be new information that’s been uncovered about the subject. Your book might challenge a long-held view of the person or subject. It might be a contrary position that you back up with evidence and argument.

Book introductions for these books are typically longer than those for how-to books. Readers of a history or biography might be new to a subject, but many of them are already familiar with the person or topic you’re writing about. Use the introduction to make your case.

You should probably count on writing a book introduction that ranges from 1,200 to 2,000 words.

However, don’t get hung up on the length. If you can create a compelling introduction, the length doesn’t matter. Always focus on selling the book to your potential readers.

Use a Hook to Hold Reader Interest

Your book introduction should start with an interesting story, anecdote, or major event that grabs the reader’s interest. This could be something that happened to you, or it could be a historical event. It should be compelling and have all the elements of a great story, including a plot, characters, conflict, and resolution.

Answer the Question, “Why You?”

Why should your reader trust the information you’ve presented in your book? You can’t assume that every reader recognizes your name or knows that you’re an expert in the subject.

Use a compelling personal story to explain why you are the best person to write it. Don’t brag about your accomplishments, but be straightforward about your background. Describe an event that made you realize a book was necessary.

Don’t go into too many personal details unless they specifically relate to the subject. In some cases, your personal experience may be the strongest selling point.

Give a Preview of the Book

The introduction is your opportunity to explain what the various parts of the book are. Describe what the reader can expect in each section or chapter. Summarize what you think the reader will gain from reading your book.

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How to Write a Killer Book Introduction

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How to write a book introduction is the biggest hurdle for most of the writers I work with.

It might be a short ebook you intend to give away to blog subscribers. Or you might be trying to pen a New York Times bestseller.

Either way, introductions often cause issues for authors.

Every time they try to elegantly link their title and chapter content with a coherent and engaging introduction, they hit the wall.

The good news is, it only takes three steps to knock down that wall.

What is the purpose of the introduction?

The best headline formulas will persuade someone to click on your blog posts, right?

And then the introductions to your articles need to convince the reader that they’ll find what they’re looking for if they continue reading.

The purpose of the introduction for your book is similar. You need to hook your reader and keep them interested in your writing.

However, since it takes much longer to read an entire book, the stakes are higher. Your book introduction needs to be even more remarkable, and it’s relevant when you’re researching how to get a book published as well.

What to put in an introduction?

Much of the mystery around how to write a book introduction involves what to put in it.

If you’re vague, will people lose interest? If you give away too much information, will people feel overwhelmed? How do you find the right balance?

Those questions are a part of classic writing problems that keep writers stuck. Or worse, those dilemmas produce weak introductions that don’t do the rest of a book justice.

Keep reading to find out exactly how to attract and maintain interest in your book.

How long should a book introduction be?

How long a book introduction should be will vary from topic to topic.

Some subjects will require more background information to hook a reader, especially if the value of reading the book is not immediately clear. Others will need less, especially if the book is about something wildly popular or unusual.

So, you don’t need to worry too much about meeting an exact length or word count as you dive into how to write a book introduction.

Instead, think about the important details someone needs to know in order to pique their interest in your book.

Finishing a book is an investment, but if the writing is enjoyable for the reader, it’s an effortless and fun activity. Use your introduction to communicate everything you need to convince a prospective reader that your book will be worth their time.

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3 steps to write a book introduction and examples

When you follow the three main steps for writing the best book introductions, you can:

  • Instantly engage your ideal reader
  • Give them certainty that Yes, this book is for them
  • Expand on the promise in your book’s title
  • Tell the reader why you’re the person to deliver on that promise
  • Indicate how you plan to do so

But first, you need to remember one key thing:

An introduction is a sales letter for your book. It’s a marketing tool.

So, as tempting as it might be to write an introduction that tries to capture the attention of “everyone,” it’s a bad idea. As noted above, it must be pitched to — and engage — your ideal reader.

I’m going to assume you know exactly who your ideal reader is .

Which means you’re ready to implement the three steps that will deliver an engaging and effective book introduction.

Step# 1: Hook the reader with a story

The human brain is hard-wired for story. Any information provided in that format instantly activates two compelling questions in our minds:

  • What happens next?
  • What’s in this for me?

Once those questions are raised, we’re hooked; we can’t help but keep reading to find out the answers.

However, you can’t learn how to write a book introduction with just any story.

You’ll get better results if you include elements of “what is” and “what could be,” which are part of Nancy Duarte’s techniques for effective storytelling in presentations .

Your story must connect to your book’s title and communicate:

  • “What is”: a current, non-ideal situation the ideal reader strongly identifies with
  • “What could be”: the better situation the reader will be able to access, presumably as a result of reading your book

Let’s look at some book introduction examples …

Check out the opening of Charles Duhigg’s The Power of Habit:

“She was the scientists’ favorite participant. Lisa Allen, according to her file, was thirty-four years old, had started smoking and drinking when she was sixteen, and had struggled with obesity for most of her life. At one point, in her mid-twenties, collection agencies were hounding her to recover $10,000 in debts. An old résumé listed her longest job as lasting less than a year. The woman in front of the researchers today, however, was lean and vibrant, with the toned legs of a runner … According to the most recent report in her file, Lisa had no outstanding debts, didn’t drink, and was in her thirty-ninth month at a graphic design firm.”

If you’ve picked up The Power of Habit, it’s likely you’re someone who’s struggled to create and maintain good habits.

By the third paragraph of this book, you’re hooked. Duhigg has shown you “what is,” (Lisa Allen had many struggles), and “what could be,” (Lisa has managed to overcome those struggles).

Duhigg’s intention is clear: This book will help you be like Lisa.

Not all opening stories are able to convey both “what is” and “what could be” as explicitly as Duhigg’s does. Sometimes the “what could be” is implied, as in the opening to Gretchen Rubin’s The Happiness Project:

“One April day, on a morning just like every other morning, I had a sudden realization: I was in danger of wasting my life. As I stared out the rain-spattered window of a city bus, I saw that the years were slipping by. ‘What do I want from life, anyway?’ I asked myself. ‘Well … I want to be happy.’ But I had never thought about what made me happy or how I might be happier.”

The nagging angst people feel when life is passing them by is “what is.” “What could be” is the removal of this angst and the attainment of happiness.

You’ll know you’ve gotten the beginning of your introduction right if:

  • It combines with the title of your book to make a strong promise to the reader. (For example, the title and opening of The Power of Habit combine to make this promise: “This book will help you form positive, long-lasting habits that will make your life better.”)
  • You’ve assured the reader you “get them” by demonstrating an understanding of “what is.”
  • The reader gets a hint of “what could be,” and feels inspired and/or excited.

Getting a handle on how to write a book introduction? Now it’s time for …

Step# 2: Show the reader why they should listen to you

Once the reader is hooked on the promise you’re making, and confident your book is for them, they want to know:

  • Who are you?
  • Why are you the person to deliver on that promise?

Before you learn how to write a book introduction, it’s tempting to reel off your résumé in response to the first question. But the reader is not interested in you specifically — they’re interested in what you have to offer them.

In his introduction to The Power of Habit, Duhigg doesn’t tell the reader he’s a Pulitzer Prize winner, that he went to Yale and Harvard, or that he worked in private equity before becoming a journalist.

Instead, he communicates why he became interested in studying habits:

“I first became interested in the science of habits eight years ago, as a newspaper reporter in Baghdad. The U.S. Military, it occurred to me as I watched it in action, is one of the biggest habit-formation experiments in history.”

See how he also mentions he’s a newspaper reporter? That tells the reader he’s able to research and report on information in a digestible manner. He goes on to explain:

“We now know why habits emerge, how they change, and the science behind their mechanics. We know how to break them into parts and rebuild them to our specifications. We understand how to make people eat less, exercise more, work more efficiently, and live healthier lives. Transforming a habit isn’t necessarily easy or quick. It isn’t always simple. But it is possible. And now we understand how.”

At this point, the reader is confident Duhigg is the guy to tell them “how.”

It’s worth noting here that you don’t need to be a newspaper reporter, scientist, or acknowledged expert to gain the confidence of the reader.

Many readers are looking for people who are only a step or two ahead of them in a journey. Some readers are keen to read the experiences of people who are at the same place in life as them. (Think fellow parents, for example.)

That’s why it’s important to know exactly who your ideal reader is.

You’ll know you’ve gotten this section right if:

  • It leaves the reader feeling they can trust you.
  • It leave the reader feeling sure you’ve got the necessary “credentials” or experience to deliver on the promise you’ve made to them in the previous section.

Then, the easiest way to launch them into the rest of the book is …

Step# 3: Give the reader a rough outline in your book introduction

While it might seem inelegant and obvious, most authors detail what’s to come in a very literal way.

Here’s how Duhigg outlines The Power of Habit:

“This book is divided into three parts. The first section focuses on how habits emerge within individual lives … The second part examines the habits of successful companies and organizations … The third part looks at the habits of societies … Each chapter revolves around a central argument: Habits can be changed, if we understand how they work.”

This section of your introduction acts as a roadmap for the reader. It tells them what to expect and creates confidence that your book will provide value for them.

You’ll know you’re successfully learning how to write a book introduction if:

  • The reader knows what’s coming and they’re excited about it.
  • They’re eager to turn the page and start Chapter 1.

It’s about overcoming objections

Reading a book is a big commitment, especially when you consider the sheer number of things competing for eyeballs in this day and age. That’s why your book’s introduction is effectively a sales page for your book.

If you sharply execute the steps above for how to write a book introduction — and make your introduction available to prospects — it will function like any great sales page.

The content will address your reader’s objections and questions:

  • Is this book relevant to my personal situation?
  • Does the author understand both where I am now, and where I want to be?
  • Does the author have the right credentials/experience to take me where I want to be?
  • How are they going to do it?

An introduction that’s engaging while it addresses a reader’s objections will both:

  • Pull the reader into the book
  • Push them through to the end

If you can get the reader to the end of your book, it’s got a good chance of impacting their lives in a meaningful way.

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Kelly Exeter is an author, editor, and ghostwriter with particular expertise in helping non-fiction writers get their book babies out into the world. Connect with her on Facebook , Twitter , and Instagram .

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February 27, 2018 at 11:14 am

Thanks Kelly for deconstructing the “killer book introduction”.

While I’m always sceptical about any formulaic approach to writing, I think using this (and other similar formulae that Copyblogger teaches) helps one overcome the fear of the blank page and get started.

After all, as Stephen King says: “The scariest moment is always just before you start. After that, things can only get better”

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February 27, 2018 at 2:25 pm

Once you get the elements down – you can move them around! Knowing what to get down definitely helps with that blank-page-itis 🙂

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February 27, 2018 at 9:08 pm

You are right with what you’ve mentioned, the introduction is the sales letter for your book!

I’ve heard this advice before. And I’m not trying to apply it to my blog posts, so I think we can say that this little tip can work for writing in general.

The introduction is definitely the best part to get your reader hooked and wanting to keep reading and get super interested in what you got to say. Implementing these little techniques can really make a big difference.

Thank you for sharing this! It’s super helpful!

Best regards! 😀

February 28, 2018 at 1:07 am

Thanks Freddy – so glad you found it helpful xx

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February 28, 2018 at 3:41 am

Though I am not out to write a book introduction in the near future, it is interesting to learn the tips you have given here. Having a structure to work is so helpful. Since it is a simple 3 step structure, it can be easily committed to memory.

You have given great examples here that clarify the point very effectively. Not only does the article give great tips it made a very interesting read.

Thanks for sharing these great tips with us. Have a great day!

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March 1, 2018 at 2:24 pm

I’m going to bookmark this and refer to it every time I need to write an introduction!

March 1, 2018 at 2:41 pm

That’s the spirit! Glad you found it helpful 🙂

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March 4, 2018 at 12:48 am

Thanks. This is very helpful. Really appreciate the simple and clear outline of what to do.

March 4, 2018 at 3:36 pm

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March 6, 2018 at 4:01 pm

This is a good tutorial on writing introductions. My question is that all of this also applies equally to the concept of writing a good first chapter. Is there anything that you would do differently in an introduction as opposed to a first chapter?

March 6, 2018 at 5:13 pm

Some books eschew an introduction and kick straight into Chapter 1 – in which case the structure above would need to be executed in Chapter 1.

For a book that already has an introduction – the introduction would have indicated ‘How we’re going to deliver on this promise we’ve made to you’. Chapter 1 wouldn’t replicate the structure of the intro, it would kick off the process of delivering on that promise 🙂

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How to Write an Impactful Introduction for a Book

The introduction is one of the most important parts of a book. It serves as the reader’s initial gateway into the story and can determine if they will continue reading. Crafting a compelling, engaging introduction requires careful planning and execution. This comprehensive 3000+ word guide will walk you through the key elements of writing a stellar book introduction that grabs readers’ attention.

What is a Book Introduction?

The introduction is the very first chapter of a book, preceding the first chapter. It acts as the prologue, setting up the story and drawing readers in. The introduction acquaints readers with:

  • The overall premise, scope and themes of the book
  • Principal characters and settings
  • The author’s storytelling style and voice
  • Intriguing hints of conflicts/mysteries to unfold

A well-written introduction serves multiple purposes:

  • Grabs the reader’s interest right away
  • Provides helpful context and orientation
  • Sets the tone, mood and style for the book
  • Foreshadows the central conflict or problem
  • Raises compelling story questions to tease the reader

The introduction should be engaging and concise while avoiding info dumps. It presents just enough to pull the reader into the story.

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Key Elements to Include in a Book Introduction

Here are some key elements skilled writers incorporate into compelling book introductions:

Impactful Opening Hook

The very first sentence establishes the tone and immediately captures interest. A powerful hook intrigues the reader and encourages them to continue. Avoid long verbose openings. Craft a succinct, vibrant first line that creates momentum.

For example, the opening line of George Orwell’s 1984 instantly sets an ominous tone: “It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”

Powerful first lines hook the reader with surprise, drama, or curiosity.

Theme Foreshadowing

Subtly weave in hints about the book’s core themes, messages or symbolism early on. This foreshadowing ties the introduction to the broader story arc.

For instance, themes of love and redemption subtly emerge in Dostoevsky’s Crime and Punishment when the protagonist observes an impoverished family with compassion.

Avoid heavy-handed theme statements upfront. Gently hint at bigger picture ideas.

Judicious Backstory

Relevant backstory about characters, prior events or context should be dispensed judiciously on a need-to-know basis. Avoid heavy info dumps that slow pacing. Sprinkle in only details that orient the reader.

In The Kite Runner, Khaled Hosseini reveals just enough history about Amir’s childhood friend Hassan to lay the foundation. More details come later.

Only share essential backstory in the introduction. Additional layers should unfold over the course of the book.

Main Characters & Setting

Briefly introduce one or more central characters and the initial setting. Engage readers’ interest in the characters early on. Just enough description should be given to envision the opening scene.

For example, in The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald introduces Nick Carraway and hints at Gatsby’s lavish extravagance by describing Nick’s modest rental cottage next to Gatsby’s mansion. This comparison tells us a lot about both characters and the setting.

Spare details about characters and settings come alive later. The introduction presents just a quick sketch.

Hint of Central Conflict

Foreshadow the primary conflict, problem, mystery or issue to be resolved without fully revealing it. Raise story questions to entice readers into continuing.

In the Harry Potter series, the early revelation that Harry is a wizard who survived an attack from the evil Lord Voldemort hints at the central conflict without giving away too much. Rowling hooks the reader by teasing this mystery.

Keep the full conflict under wraps. A taste in the introduction builds anticipation.

The Author’s Voice/Style

The author’s writing voice and style should be apparent from the start. Give readers a taste of the narration and tone so they know what to expect.

Mark Twain establishes his wry voice early in Huckleberry Finn through young Huck’s candid first-person narration and humorously flawed grammar and vernacular.

Let the author’s unique voice shine through from page one.

Smooth Transition

The end of the introduction should flow seamlessly into the first chapter. Leave readers wanting more at the transition point.

Harper Lee crafts a smooth transition in To Kill a Mockingbird by ending the introduction with young Scout heading to school on her first day, priming the reader for chapter one.

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How Long Should a Book Introduction Be?

The ideal length of a book introduction can vary substantially depending on the genre:

  • Fiction: Typically 1-3 chapters or 5-10 pages. Shouldn’t exceed 10% of total book length.
  • Nonfiction: Often 1-2 pages or a single chapter summarizing scope. Some memoirs may have lengthier introductions.
  • Children’s Books: Just 1-2 paragraphs on a dedicated introductory page.

Regardless of genre, keep the introduction focused and brisk enough not to lose momentum. Get to the heart of the story quickly while providing requisite orientation to hook the reader.

For instance, in fiction, an introduction might be:

  • 5 pages in a 300 page book
  • 10 pages in a 500 page book
  • 3 short chapters in a 200 page novella

Adapt introduction length to the overall book size and scope while keeping it tight.

Dos and Don’ts of Writing a Book Introduction

Follow these tips when crafting an engaging book introduction:

The introduction sets the stage – give readers just enough to whet their appetite without spoiling anything to come.

How to Structure a Good Book Introduction

Follow this process when developing an impactful book introduction:

1. Identify the core theme/premise. This informs what details to focus on in the introduction. Have clarity on themes that underpin the whole work.

2. Decide on the opening scene. Choose a strong starting image, moment or action as the hook to draw readers in immediately.

3. Introduce one or more main characters. Give just enough physical/personality details to make the characters compelling – more depth comes later.

4. Set the initial tone and voice. Let the author’s style shine through from page one. Establish the atmosphere of the whole work.

5. Hint at the central dramatic question/conflict. Pose the overarching issues to be addressed without answering how they’ll be resolved.

6. Add relevant backstory/context judiciously. Share only what is absolutely necessary for readers to know at this stage. Keep momentum going.

7. Foreshadow themes and symbolism. Weave in subtle hints about larger themes and messages without stating them overtly.

8. Transition smoothly into the first chapter. End the introduction in a way that immerses readers seamlessly into chapter one.

Follow this blueprint when structuring an impactful introduction. Outline key scenes, characters, tone and foreshadowing elements.

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Examples of Good Book Introductions

Looking at different examples can help illustrate what makes an effective book introduction. Here are some classics with memorable opening chapters:

Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen

The witty first line immediately sets the tone for the comedy of manners to follow:

“It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.”

Frankenstein by Mary Shelley

The introduction paints the scene aboard a ship stuck in icy Arctic seas, priming readers for the Gothic tale ahead.

The Fellowship of the Ring by J.R.R. Tolkien

Tolkien masterfully uses the introduction to provide background history of the One Ring before Bilbo’s 111th birthday party.

The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins

Collins uses the introduction to efficiently establish the dystopian world of Panem and the Reaping that drives the plot.

Beloved by Toni Morrison

Morrison’s lyrical opening immediately conveys the ghostly mood surrounding a haunted house in post-Civil War Ohio.

Study well-crafted book introductions in your genre for guidance. Ask whether the opening drew you in and made you eager to read more.

How to Grab Reader Attention Right Away

Some proven hooks to immediately capture reader interest:

  • Begin with evocative sensory details – sights, smells, textures, sounds
  • Start at a pivotal moment of action, intrigue or confrontation
  • Open with an intriguing snippet of dialogue between characters
  • Pose an unanswered question that provokes curiosity
  • Feature an impactful first line that surprises or intrigues
  • Use vivid description of the initial setting to establish atmosphere
  • Jump right into a tense situation or problem to hook interest
  • Introduce an unusual character that fascinates readers

You only have a page or two to grab attention – leverage the author’s voice and story elements for maximum impact.

Introduction Mistakes to Avoid

Steer clear of these common introduction pitfalls:

  • Providing too much wordy exposition upfront
  • Overloading backstory and context before readers are invested
  • Opening with dense character physical description
  • Rambling structure that takes too long to get to the point
  • Vague premise that leaves readers confused about the plot
  • Flat tone that fails to convey the author’s unique voice
  • Weighty preamble that loses momentum
  • Hinting too overtly at climactic twists best unveiled later
  • Forcing a lengthy hook when a line or two would suffice
  • First chapter that doesn’t flow seamlessly from the introduction

Keep introductions focused and fast-paced. Save in-depth elaborations for when readers are fully immersed in the story.

Tips for Revising a Book Introduction

When revising a draft introduction, check that it:

  • Has an opening hook that instantly intrigues
  • Provides just enough orientation without overloading readers
  • Foreshadows the central conflict subtly
  • Establishes an immersive mood and tone
  • Initializes one or more compelling main characters
  • Hints at core themes without overtly spoiling them
  • Uses vivid sensory details and judicious dialogue
  • Transitions smoothly into the first chapter
  • Keeps extraneous details and backstory to a minimum
  • Moves briskly at a captivating pace
  • Draws readers to continue with well-placed cliffhangers

Revisit whether each sentence is vital and contributes to an impactful opening. Remove any fluff or distractions.

A Strong Introduction Sets Up the Entire Book

Readers will decide whether to invest their time in a book based largely on the introduction. A boring, confusing or slow opening risks losing readers instantly. But a skillfully crafted introduction primes readers for the experience ahead.

Follow proven strategies for intrigue, structure and concision. With a stellar introduction that hooks interest right away, you give your book its best shot at resonating with readers from page one. Invest time in perfecting these critical first impressions – the introduction often sets the stage for the entire reader journey.

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All Nonfiction books have a beginning (book introduction), a middle (body) and an end (conclusion). We’ve been taught at school that whenever we create a written essay, our goal must always be to “First tell them what we’re going to tell them, then tell them, and finally tell them what we told them.”

Because this is ingrained in our minds, many first-time entrepreneurial writers think that a book introduction is supposed to be just an advance read of their book, a prologue of sorts. The reality is that in the nonfiction genre second to your book cover the introduction is the most influential part of your book.

Learning how to write a book introduction the right way will determine whether your nonfiction book will live or die. Yes, your introduction is that critical for the success of your book!

Yes, your introduction is that critical for the success of your book.

Because it’s the place where you have to “hook” the reader into buying and reading your book. An attractive cover page and clever title will only get people as far along as picking up your book and opening it – in marketing parlance, this is how you get the lead. The introduction, however, is where you actually close the sale.

What’s the Purpose of The Introduction in a Book?

The purpose of the introduction is to be the “sales letter” for your book.

A successful sales letter that will close a lead needs to have a specific structure that guides your reader through a proper sales process to your desired result. In your case, it could be one of the following five outcomes:

  • You want anyone who’s picked up your book in a store or clicked the Look Inside feature on Amazon to be moved to open their wallets and purchase your book.
  • If you handed your book to a prospect as a calling card, then you want them to read your book and ultimately hire your services over your competitors’.
  • If you handed the book to an event manager, you want to be booked for a paid speaking engagement (most event managers won’t read past your book introduction since they receive a large number of titles and don’t really have the time to read them).
  • If you sent your book to a media outlet, you want to land an interview – segment producers don’t have time to read the multiple titles they receive either, so the sales letter contained in your book introduction is all you have to hook them.
  • If you handed your book to a potential strategic partner, you want your calling card to develop into a strategic relationship.

Does the Book Introduction Come Before the Table of Contents?

The table of contents always comes first, because it’s part of the front matter of your book. The front matter includes sections like the Copyright Page, the Title Page, the Foreword and the Preface (we’ll talk about the latter two a bit further down). The introduction is considered part of your book’s body and is placed right before your first chapter.

Sometimes new authors think that the table of contents is what entices prospective readers, because they will often scan it as soon as they open your book in order to browse its contents.

While this behavior pattern is true, the table of contents is a very weak selling tool because it’s not a proper sales letter. That’s why you need to create an introduction that compels readers to buy your book.

How to Write an Effective Book Introduction?

It’s critical that your book introduction be 100% about your reader and 0% about you – we’ll discuss a little later where you can introduce your personal story and tell your readers about yourself.

Your introduction must clearly show how your book will help solve your reader’s problem in a unique way .

Before we get into how to craft a compelling introduction for your book, let’s clarify the key differences between an introduction, a preface and a foreword – three unique sections that have very defined roles in the marketing of your book .

What’s the Difference Between a Book Introduction, a Preface and a Foreword?

As stated above, the introduction is the sales letter for your book and it must always be centered on your reader and what your book will do for them (it must always answer their primary question: “What’s in it for me?”).

What Do You Write in a Preface?

The Preface, on the other hand, is all about you. Here you can share your personal story, the journey that has led you to write your book, what your book does (but not “how” it does it), why you are qualified to write this book and, if your book has been published before, that this is an updated edition and outlining what the changes are.

In short, the preface is the vehicle that you use to have an initial personal conversation with the readers to start building rapport .

A word of caution: Since you’ll be telling your reader about yourself, it’s imperative that you’re not perceived as “bragging” or being a shameless self-promoter.

This section is the place to tell your readers who you are in order to build rapport, not to impress them or be boastful about your accomplishments or credentials (however, you can mention a specific credential if it’s something you feel the reader needs to know).

Only include those pieces of personal information that are relevant to your personal journey in relation to your book and how the book came to be.

What Do You Write in a Foreword?

The Foreword is a comment about your book or about you or both, written by a recognized influencer with a large following in your industry. We’re talking about a “celebrity” whose credibility is well established and recognized in your field and by the media at large.

Now, to be quite honest these are very hard to get unless you have a direct connection with these individuals.

Unless you know the celebrity personally in some capacity (perhaps through family and friends, or perhaps you’ve done work for them in the past and they hold you in high regard), it’s highly unlikely that they’ll sing your praises, because they value their personal brand and will likely never put their reputation on the line for an unknown author. Unless, of course, your book is so outstanding in their eyes that you manage to “knock their socks off.”

If you can secure one, however, a positive foreword by someone famous has the potential to launch your book into the stratosphere. There are many accounts of unknown nonfiction book authors that went on to achieve great success through the giant doors that were swung open by a powerful foreword from such a person.

Having said that, unless you already have a solid connection to a celebrity in your niche, don’t spend too much time trying to obtain a foreword. Spend this time instead writing a killer book introduction , which I’m going to show you how to do next.

How To Write a Book Introduction that Grabs the Interest of Readers

Since introductions are sales letters, they must be structured in a specific way to entice your “leads” to become “customers”.

To create a truly compelling introduction that will entice your readers to read your book, you have to implement the following nine steps:

1) Draw Your Readers In

Advance Reader Group

The first paragraph in your book introduction is the most important one , because it must “hook” your readers into reading the entire section.

One of the most powerful hooks is the power of the “story,” because our brains are wired to be highly susceptible to them. But we’re not talking about just any kind of story.

Your Story Must First Show Them the Problem Your Book Will Solve…

  • Your story must be about a problem that your readers deeply identify with . It could be based on your own experience, the experience of a client, the experience of a stranger, or even the experience of a fictional character.
  • It must clearly identify the situation that your readers face right now through the use of a “character” they can easily relate to, or through posing questions that the book will eventually answer – e.g. “Do you find yourself ____?,” “Are you feeling ____?,” “Are you stuck in ____?,” etc.

…and Then Show Them the Expected End Result

  • Your story must then show the character’s transformation after applying your solution. You could end your story with a statement like: “This book will show the exact steps you need to follow so you can experience what <Character’s Name> achieved.”

2) Reveal Your Solution, But Don’t Reveal too Much

When you describe the solution that your book provides, don’t explain “how” your readers will achieve the solution; just mention “what” it is. Use statements like: “This book will show you how to _____”. To learn how your solution actually works, they must read your book!

3) Show Them Why They Should Listen to You

This is the part of the book introduction where you build your credibility . The goal of this step is for readers to trust you and, once again, this is not achieved by listing a bunch of accomplishments.

Instead, you’ll achieve this goal by showing what made you pursue the research that has led to your particular solution (perhaps at one point you were in the same boat your readers are in now).

It would also be useful to describe your observations as you pursued your solution and to also show a summary of the steps that you took in order to reach your “discovery.”

Finally, you want to convey your passion about your subject matter and what’s driving your desire to improve the lives of people (or businesses) who are afflicted with this problem.

4) Show Them a Roadmap from Problem to Solution

Now it’s time to show your readers your roadmap . For example, you can list the different parts or sections of your book and what the reader is expected to learn in each (e.g. “In part one we discuss…,” “In part two the book will cover….” etc.).

The goal here is to “whet the reader’s appetite” with a high-level view of what they’ll achieve by reading your book, without revealing any of the specifics.

5) Show Them the Benefits They’ll Receive

This is where you translate your solution into clear and tangible benefits the reader will get by reading your book.

These benefits are the various outcomes the reader will experience with your solution. What you want to do is to paint a picture of the reader’s future as vividly as you possibly can – e.g. “Do you want to be stress free?,” “financially free?,” “healthier bones?,” “debt free?.” and so on.

6) Show Them Your Guarantee (i.e. Social Proof)

Once you’ve helped your reader “see” what the future will look like after reading your book, you need to show them your proof.

In other words, this is where you mention testimonials, be it stories from real people or organizations (no fiction here, please!) who have already benefited from your solution.

This information must come from your own clients. You should naturally seek their permission first, and it’s totally acceptable to abbreviate or even change their names or some circumstances in order to protect their privacy and identity.

7) Address Their Objections

This part is optional but can be quite effective. The goal here is to address the main objections that you know of.

What you want to do here is to bring up each objection – no more than 3-5 – and then explain how your solution will take care of it.

8) Entice Them to Take Action

Now it’s time to “close the deal.” You will do this by making it clear to readers that if they follow the secrets/formulas/steps revealed in your book, they will achieve the goal revealed by your title and sub-title .

Make sure your reader is always the subject – e.g. “if ‘you’ apply the secrets/formulas/steps revealed in this book, ‘you’ will be debt free within 5 years.” “…’you’ will be able to lose weight and keep it off permanently.” “…’your’ business revenue will double,” etc.

9) Wish Them Well and Transition to the Book’s Content

This is a short transitional sentence to guide your reader to the beginning chapter of your book. By extending an invitation to read your book and wishing them well, you’re bringing the attention back to the reader.

To transition to your book’s body you can end the introduction with a phrase like “Let’s now embark together on your journey to <desired goal of your reader (i.e. your solution)>.”

How Long Should a Book Introduction Be?

Since the book introduction is a sales letter, you want to make sure that it always flows and that it never gets “stuck” with unnecessary language. You want to keep it tight and not overwrite it (beware: too much writing could potentially undo the sale!).

As a rule of thumb, you want to keep it in the range of 1.5 to 3 pages, depending on the nature of your subject matter.

Congratulations! You now have a strong foundation to craft a compelling book introduction that can “seal the deal.”

As a parting tip, write your book introduction only after your manuscript is completed . Don’t write it first or you’ll be wasting a lot of time.

The reason is that there’s a good chance that during the editing process your chapters will be rearranged and the final order of your table of contents will only fully settle when your book is ready for publication.

Some writers are of the thought that the conclusion should be the last thing you write, but I beg to differ. In my opinion, the introduction should be written after the conclusion, since it’s technically not part of the book content but a sales and marketing document that needs to be crafted separately.

One Last Thing…

If you are now in the initial stages of your book project, I invite you to read my article: How to Write a Compelling Book in 12 Steps: A Must-Read Guide for Nonfiction Authors . It’ll provide you with a clear and efficient roadmap for your book-writing project so you don’t end up spinning your wheels.

Now it’s time to write a great book introduction!

All the best,

If you enjoyed this article and are in the process of writing a nonfiction book, be sure to check out my free nonfiction success guide , drawn from years of experience editing books for bestselling authors (including a New York Times bestseller) and ghostwriting for CEOs and politicians. Simply click here to get instant access .

Leave me a comment below if you have any questions or a specific need that I can help you address – I operate an author services firm that specializes in helping entrepreneurs, professionals and business owners who want to publish books as a calling card for prospects, to establish their status as an expert or to generate additional leads for their businesses.

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6 Book Introduction Examples: Helpful Secrets To Compelling Intros

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by Sarah Rexford

The topic of book introduction examples is vital to dive into due to their influence on readers’ mindset. How a reader feels when he or she starts chapter one and page one of your manuscript impacts how they respond to your writing.

When you’ve spent weeks, months, or even years writing your book, reader satisfaction is an important next step. But is gaining reader satisfaction before they even read sentence one a viable option? 

You may be surprised that a well-crafted book introduction is your secret we apon to st and out . If you want happy readers before they open to the first chapter, you’ve come to the right place. 

Book Introduction Examples: What Makes A Good One?

Great book introduction examples focus on four key points that result in quickly hooking the reader. An introduction is often written by the author, but can be written by someone else. No matter who writes the intro, it’s crucial to grab the reader and articulate a few points as to why the book is such an important read. 

Let’s take a closer look at these specific points and then transition into actual book introduction examples from writers who did it well. 

Grab the reader

If you can’t hook your reader with your book introduction, you’ve likely lost them already. Good book introduction examples are ones that briefly (key word, briefly) present an overview of the coming book in a way that arouses the reader’s curiosity . 

When writing your intro, ask: What would make me interested to read more? When deciding how to write your introduction, write down your answers to this question and consider incorporating them into your intro. 

Call out their pain point

Additionally, readers need to know you understand their pain. Whether you write a business book on how to start from zero and earn your first six-figures, or write a fantasy empowering children to think creatively , good book introduction examples are ones that know the pain of their readers. 

Some pain points may be less obvious (such as the need to learn a lesson or see a situation differently) but most books, arguably all books, address some form of pain point. Great introductions know the pain point and communicate it to readers.

Establish your credibility 

Establishing your credibility as an author goes hand-in-hand with calling out your readers’ pain points. Once your reader knows you understand what they’re going through, they want to a clear reason as to why you are the one most credible to help them. 

Maybe you started out as a part-time writer at a marketing agency and now you own your own company. Maybe in high school you were terrified of public speaking, but now you’re a trusted thought leader in your field. These examples reveal you are credible on your topic.

Dive into the book

At their core, book intros are not written to recap the book and satisfy the reader, but pique the reader’s interest so they are prepared to dive right into your content. Resist the urge to belabor your points or share too much of your own bio or credibility. Write what you need to, then get into the book. 

3 Fiction Book Introduction Examples

Now that you know what sets good book introduction examples apart from bad ones, it’s time to discuss real examples. What are some books that have done this well?

#1 – The Boy, the Mole, the Fox, and the Horse

This classic children’s book (now an animated short film) includes a personal introduction by the author, Charlie Mackesy. In his brief introduction, Mackesy provides further clarity on the story behind the film.

Perhaps more importantly, his characters. Written in a tone that matches the story, he draws readers in and sets them up for a compelling, even transforming, read.

#2 – The Last Operative

It’s important to include Jerry B. Jenkins’ The Last Operative among the book introduction examples listed, specifically because of its new edition. First releases can go with or without an introduction, but for new releases, it’s imperative to write a brief introduction. 

This specific introduction is labeled as an Author’s Note, but the intro is so important it caused Jenkins (a 21-time, New York Times bestselling author) to break his own rule of avoiding front matter and jumping straight into the story. 

#3 – Fahrenheit 451

Ray Bradbury’s famous novel’s 60th edition includes an introduction by Neil Gaiman . This book has stood the test of time and decades after its first release, is still a bestseller and recognized as a classic in American literature. 

In his intro, Gaiman takes a shallow dive into the importance of speculative fiction, the importance of imagination, and his relationship with Bradbury. This thoughtful beginning to a well-loved classic is a must to include in our great book introduction examples. 

3 Nonfiction Book Introduction Examples

Just like fiction, nonfiction books often include intros. So, moving on to nonfiction book introduction examples, let’s begin with a book on writing.

#1 – Troubleshooting Your Novel

Steven James is known for his thrillers as well as his books on the writing craft. At less than one page, Steven James’ introduction is extremely brief. In his several paragraphs of personal reflection, Steven James teaches the one-line lesson he learned early in his writing journey that not only inspired this book but helped further his career.

#2 – Marketing Made Simple

Donald Miller is a marketing guru who needs no introduction. However, despite his platform, he spends roughly three pages providing a brief marketing lesson. This lesson serves as a launching pad for the rest of his book. He also shares the one key aspect that derails marketing endeavors, subtly setting readers up to devour his book, and then put it into practice. 

#3 – Bird By Bird

This classic read by Anne Lamott starts with an extensive retelling of a childhood experience and the story behind her book title. 

While most good book introduction examples are brief, Lamott uses her storytelling expertise to hook the reader, identify their pain point, and establish her own credibility. And she’s Anne Lamott, so she can get by with a bit longer of an introduction!  

Draw From These Book Introduction Examples To Inspire Your Own

As you grow in your writing career, chances are that at some point you will experience one of the following situations:

  • Another author may ask you to write an introduction for their book
  • You may find it helpful to write an introduction for your own book

Now that you’ve seen a variety of great book introduction examples, you’re equipped to start writing your own. Remember, the key to success lies in hooking your reader, being concise, and inspiring your reader to dive right into chapter one.

The best introductions prepare your audience for the rest of your book. Whether you write fiction, nonfiction, or are writing an introduction for an author you respect, keep in mind that the introduction is not the end point. 

Your book introduction is like a video thumbnail or the key photo on a live image—why do influencers spend time finding the perfect graphic? To engage their audience and pull them into their content. The same goes for writers and book introductions. Happy writing!

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Hi! I JUST saw this – a month later. Sorry! Memoir is a different beast. Because it’s written as a story, you for sure want to hook your reader – that’s a non-negotiable. But, the rest are really geared toward self-help or transformational non-fiction where the reader is looking to solve some sort of problem. Generally, people pick up memoir with the idea of being inspired or entertained and that happens through the telling of the story rather than through learning a process as in self-help. So the narrative is the most important piece of memoir. If that’s done well, it will hook the reader and possibly inspire or educate them, but that’s not the primary goal.

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How To Start An Introduction For Grabbing Reader’s Attention

By Laura Brown on 28th December 2020

Carrying an introduction is the most crucial element while you are writing an academic paper. It can give your reader an idea of what is coming next in the complete paper. Either they should give it a read or not.

Well, if you are worried about starting an introduction to your papers, we have come up with seven amazing points that can help you put an engaging introductory paragraph. These ideas can be summarised as follows:

  • Making a strong, interesting statement
  • Creating authority with stats and facts
  • Developing curiosity with questions
  • Building up an attractive story
  • Leveraging compare and contrast game
  • Describing your statement to the readers
  • Including a quotation to mark your story

Now, everyone wants their readers to feel curious while reading their papers. The easiest way to grab the interest of your reader is by making an intriguing introduction. You can achieve it by using some attention-grabbing hooks.

An ideal hook is placed in the first paragraph of the introduction to engage readers. It may be a 1-3 sentence long to spark the curiosity of people and makes them wonder what will happen next.

Many people find it difficult because they are unaware of how to write a good introduction, a natural way of including a hook can make your introduction stand out. If you succeed in catching the attention of your readers, then you have 50% achieved the milestone to fall them in love with your manuscript.

How To Start An Introduction – 7 Hooks To Grab Reader’s Attention

Below are seven attention-grabbing writing hooks from the experts of Crowd Writer UK that will make your readers want to find out more in the rest of your paper so you may find a way to compose a better introduction for your essay.

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1. The Statement Hook

A strong statement is a bold claim related to the topic. It shows the importance of your context and connects to your thesis statement. Placing a declaration is an excellent technique because it doesn’t seem dependent upon the agreement of your readers, and hence, you may have to support it with authentic evidence.

Example: “In-person educational classes are more costly than online classes.”

2. The Fact/ Statistic Hook

Facts and statistics are the best hooks as they provide proven data to your readers. Some figures may add a WOW factor to them. You can impress them with the research and knowledge from the opening of your paper or an essay.

However, you may need to include accurate facts that are reliable and interesting . Therefore, it is recommended to analyse and evaluate your data to make sure it is coming from a credible source.

Example: “Alzheimer’s is the 5th most common cause of death in old age people of the United States.” (The Pew Research Center)

3. The Interesting Question Hook

A question hook is used to ask a question in the very beginning of your introduction that relates to your topic or its background.

For instance, for this article, you can use a question like, how to write a good introduction?

Moreover, the only way to get the answer is by reading your dissertation.

It is a human psychology that when we hear or read something inquisitive, we want to know the answer. If we don’t know the answer, we opt to find it. Thus, when a manuscript is started with a question hook, it gives a clear signal to your readers that they have to read the entire writing to get the answer. Make sure it’s worth reading.

Example: what are the most common habits of successful students? Or what should a personal statement include ?

4. The Story Hook

People love to read stories, especially when a story is unique and well-written. If you know how to start an introduction, a story hook can be your masterstroke. It lets you begin your writing with a short story that is related to your topic. Make sure that the tale relevantly connects to your topic.

A story can be of a famous manuscript or someone else’s personal story. This hook is longer than other types of hooks. However, it should not be a significant part of your introduction. It is recommended to place a story hook according to the length of your essay and ask yourself if this hook is acceptable in particular writing or not.

Example: The phone call

A few days ago, I remember when my father was having a meeting with one of our staff member. I was just sitting beside them on my sea when my father’s company phone rang.

My father  ignored  it.

After three rings, Melissa (the one my father was having a meeting with) looked at him and asked,  “Will you not pick up the phone?”

My father took a pause and replied, “No, I will not as I’m not sure if that call is important or not. But, I’m sure this meeting is important as we are going to discuss how to write an essay introduction .”

Feeling valued, she got a big smile, and they continued the conversation with new energy.

The Lesson: What you pay attention to, and how you respond to things matters a great deal to your team.

5. The Simile/ Metaphor Hook

A simile hook is a unique way to get the attention of your readers as it makes them think differently about your topic. A metaphor is simply a comparison of two or more things that may seem to be unrelated. It makes readers wonder how you are going to compare two entirely opposite entities.

Simile and metaphor both compare two unconnected things. However, a simile is less intense than a metaphor. If you want to write on sensitive topics, then it is better to choose a simile like poetry and history. Alternatively, for fact-based fields like business and physics, you can use a metaphor.

Metaphor: A website’s blog pulls clients to the company like a magnet. 

Simile: A website’s blog is like a magnet that attracts clients to the business.

6. The Description Hook

A vivid description of your scene is an ideal hook to draw your reader’s attention. It may not be as easy as reading how to start an introduction. However, a well-crafted description hook makes readers curious about what will come next in the manuscript. This hook is most used in narrative essays and can be included in academic papers as well. Like the story hook, it’s you to decide if this hook works for your writing or not.

Example: The cat limped along the roadside, moaned in pain and. Blood was streaming down from her injured leg. 

7. The Quotation Hook

Most commonly used hook is a quotation hook. It is when you start your writing with the quote of either from a famous person or a favourite book. Also, if it is not notable enough yet connects with your topic, you may insert it with full confidence. It is best to quote precisely the same statement with reference.

Example: “The past is already gone; the future is not yet here. There’s only one moment for you to live.” (Buddha)

Conclusion – How To Start An Introduction

An introduction is, without any doubt, the most important pillar of your content. If you have cracked how to write an introduction, then you can definitely kick things off.

Although students often find it challenging to initiate their papers, it is always an exciting task to perform. You look up numerous ideas and go through various thoughts. With the seven building-block that we have discussed, you can come up with a rock-solid introduction for any of your papers.

However, if you still find it challenging on how to start an introduction, you can contact our experienced team at Crowd Writer UK at any time for all kinds of assignment writing service .

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Laura Brown, a senior content writer who writes actionable blogs at Crowd Writer.

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The introduction of an essay plays a critical role in engaging the reader and providing contextual information about the topic. It sets the stage for the rest of the essay, establishes the tone and style, and motivates the reader to continue reading. 

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What is an essay introduction , what to include in an essay introduction, how to create an essay structure , step-by-step process for writing an essay introduction , how to write an introduction paragraph , how to write a hook for your essay , how to include background information , how to write a thesis statement .

  • Argumentative Essay Introduction Example: 
  • Expository Essay Introduction Example 

Literary Analysis Essay Introduction Example

Check and revise – checklist for essay introduction , key takeaways , frequently asked questions .

An introduction is the opening section of an essay, paper, or other written work. It introduces the topic and provides background information, context, and an overview of what the reader can expect from the rest of the work. 1 The key is to be concise and to the point, providing enough information to engage the reader without delving into excessive detail. 

The essay introduction is crucial as it sets the tone for the entire piece and provides the reader with a roadmap of what to expect. Here are key elements to include in your essay introduction: 

  • Hook : Start with an attention-grabbing statement or question to engage the reader. This could be a surprising fact, a relevant quote, or a compelling anecdote. 
  • Background information : Provide context and background information to help the reader understand the topic. This can include historical information, definitions of key terms, or an overview of the current state of affairs related to your topic. 
  • Thesis statement : Clearly state your main argument or position on the topic. Your thesis should be concise and specific, providing a clear direction for your essay. 

Before we get into how to write an essay introduction, we need to know how it is structured. The structure of an essay is crucial for organizing your thoughts and presenting them clearly and logically. It is divided as follows: 2  

  • Introduction:  The introduction should grab the reader’s attention with a hook, provide context, and include a thesis statement that presents the main argument or purpose of the essay.  
  • Body:  The body should consist of focused paragraphs that support your thesis statement using evidence and analysis. Each paragraph should concentrate on a single central idea or argument and provide evidence, examples, or analysis to back it up.  
  • Conclusion:  The conclusion should summarize the main points and restate the thesis differently. End with a final statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader. Avoid new information or arguments. 

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Here’s a step-by-step guide on how to write an essay introduction: 

  • Start with a Hook : Begin your introduction paragraph with an attention-grabbing statement, question, quote, or anecdote related to your topic. The hook should pique the reader’s interest and encourage them to continue reading. 
  • Provide Background Information : This helps the reader understand the relevance and importance of the topic. 
  • State Your Thesis Statement : The last sentence is the main argument or point of your essay. It should be clear, concise, and directly address the topic of your essay. 
  • Preview the Main Points : This gives the reader an idea of what to expect and how you will support your thesis. 
  • Keep it Concise and Clear : Avoid going into too much detail or including information not directly relevant to your topic. 
  • Revise : Revise your introduction after you’ve written the rest of your essay to ensure it aligns with your final argument. 

Here’s an example of an essay introduction paragraph about the importance of education: 

Education is often viewed as a fundamental human right and a key social and economic development driver. As Nelson Mandela once famously said, “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.” It is the key to unlocking a wide range of opportunities and benefits for individuals, societies, and nations. In today’s constantly evolving world, education has become even more critical. It has expanded beyond traditional classroom learning to include digital and remote learning, making education more accessible and convenient. This essay will delve into the importance of education in empowering individuals to achieve their dreams, improving societies by promoting social justice and equality, and driving economic growth by developing a skilled workforce and promoting innovation. 

This introduction paragraph example includes a hook (the quote by Nelson Mandela), provides some background information on education, and states the thesis statement (the importance of education). 

This is one of the key steps in how to write an essay introduction. Crafting a compelling hook is vital because it sets the tone for your entire essay and determines whether your readers will stay interested. A good hook draws the reader in and sets the stage for the rest of your essay.  

  • Avoid Dry Fact : Instead of simply stating a bland fact, try to make it engaging and relevant to your topic. For example, if you’re writing about the benefits of exercise, you could start with a startling statistic like, “Did you know that regular exercise can increase your lifespan by up to seven years?” 
  • Avoid Using a Dictionary Definition : While definitions can be informative, they’re not always the most captivating way to start an essay. Instead, try to use a quote, anecdote, or provocative question to pique the reader’s interest. For instance, if you’re writing about freedom, you could begin with a quote from a famous freedom fighter or philosopher. 
  • Do Not Just State a Fact That the Reader Already Knows : This ties back to the first point—your hook should surprise or intrigue the reader. For Here’s an introduction paragraph example, if you’re writing about climate change, you could start with a thought-provoking statement like, “Despite overwhelming evidence, many people still refuse to believe in the reality of climate change.” 

Including background information in the introduction section of your essay is important to provide context and establish the relevance of your topic. When writing the background information, you can follow these steps: 

  • Start with a General Statement:  Begin with a general statement about the topic and gradually narrow it down to your specific focus. For example, when discussing the impact of social media, you can begin by making a broad statement about social media and its widespread use in today’s society, as follows: “Social media has become an integral part of modern life, with billions of users worldwide.” 
  • Define Key Terms : Define any key terms or concepts that may be unfamiliar to your readers but are essential for understanding your argument. 
  • Provide Relevant Statistics:  Use statistics or facts to highlight the significance of the issue you’re discussing. For instance, “According to a report by Statista, the number of social media users is expected to reach 4.41 billion by 2025.” 
  • Discuss the Evolution:  Mention previous research or studies that have been conducted on the topic, especially those that are relevant to your argument. Mention key milestones or developments that have shaped its current impact. You can also outline some of the major effects of social media. For example, you can briefly describe how social media has evolved, including positives such as increased connectivity and issues like cyberbullying and privacy concerns. 
  • Transition to Your Thesis:  Use the background information to lead into your thesis statement, which should clearly state the main argument or purpose of your essay. For example, “Given its pervasive influence, it is crucial to examine the impact of social media on mental health.” 

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A thesis statement is a concise summary of the main point or claim of an essay, research paper, or other type of academic writing. It appears near the end of the introduction. Here’s how to write a thesis statement: 

  • Identify the topic:  Start by identifying the topic of your essay. For example, if your essay is about the importance of exercise for overall health, your topic is “exercise.” 
  • State your position:  Next, state your position or claim about the topic. This is the main argument or point you want to make. For example, if you believe that regular exercise is crucial for maintaining good health, your position could be: “Regular exercise is essential for maintaining good health.” 
  • Support your position:  Provide a brief overview of the reasons or evidence that support your position. These will be the main points of your essay. For example, if you’re writing an essay about the importance of exercise, you could mention the physical health benefits, mental health benefits, and the role of exercise in disease prevention. 
  • Make it specific:  Ensure your thesis statement clearly states what you will discuss in your essay. For example, instead of saying, “Exercise is good for you,” you could say, “Regular exercise, including cardiovascular and strength training, can improve overall health and reduce the risk of chronic diseases.” 

Examples of essay introduction 

Here are examples of essay introductions for different types of essays: 

Argumentative Essay Introduction Example:  

Topic: Should the voting age be lowered to 16? 

“The question of whether the voting age should be lowered to 16 has sparked nationwide debate. While some argue that 16-year-olds lack the requisite maturity and knowledge to make informed decisions, others argue that doing so would imbue young people with agency and give them a voice in shaping their future.” 

Expository Essay Introduction Example  

Topic: The benefits of regular exercise 

“In today’s fast-paced world, the importance of regular exercise cannot be overstated. From improving physical health to boosting mental well-being, the benefits of exercise are numerous and far-reaching. This essay will examine the various advantages of regular exercise and provide tips on incorporating it into your daily routine.” 

Text: “To Kill a Mockingbird” by Harper Lee 

“Harper Lee’s novel, ‘To Kill a Mockingbird,’ is a timeless classic that explores themes of racism, injustice, and morality in the American South. Through the eyes of young Scout Finch, the reader is taken on a journey that challenges societal norms and forces characters to confront their prejudices. This essay will analyze the novel’s use of symbolism, character development, and narrative structure to uncover its deeper meaning and relevance to contemporary society.” 

  • Engaging and Relevant First Sentence : The opening sentence captures the reader’s attention and relates directly to the topic. 
  • Background Information : Enough background information is introduced to provide context for the thesis statement. 
  • Definition of Important Terms : Key terms or concepts that might be unfamiliar to the audience or are central to the argument are defined. 
  • Clear Thesis Statement : The thesis statement presents the main point or argument of the essay. 
  • Relevance to Main Body : Everything in the introduction directly relates to and sets up the discussion in the main body of the essay. 

how to write a book introduction that grabs the interest of readers

Writing a strong introduction is crucial for setting the tone and context of your essay. Here are the key takeaways for how to write essay introduction: 3  

  • Hook the Reader : Start with an engaging hook to grab the reader’s attention. This could be a compelling question, a surprising fact, a relevant quote, or an anecdote. 
  • Provide Background : Give a brief overview of the topic, setting the context and stage for the discussion. 
  • Thesis Statement : State your thesis, which is the main argument or point of your essay. It should be concise, clear, and specific. 
  • Preview the Structure : Outline the main points or arguments to help the reader understand the organization of your essay. 
  • Keep it Concise : Avoid including unnecessary details or information not directly related to your thesis. 
  • Revise and Edit : Revise your introduction to ensure clarity, coherence, and relevance. Check for grammar and spelling errors. 
  • Seek Feedback : Get feedback from peers or instructors to improve your introduction further. 

The purpose of an essay introduction is to give an overview of the topic, context, and main ideas of the essay. It is meant to engage the reader, establish the tone for the rest of the essay, and introduce the thesis statement or central argument.  

An essay introduction typically ranges from 5-10% of the total word count. For example, in a 1,000-word essay, the introduction would be roughly 50-100 words. However, the length can vary depending on the complexity of the topic and the overall length of the essay.

An essay introduction is critical in engaging the reader and providing contextual information about the topic. To ensure its effectiveness, consider incorporating these key elements: a compelling hook, background information, a clear thesis statement, an outline of the essay’s scope, a smooth transition to the body, and optional signposting sentences.  

The process of writing an essay introduction is not necessarily straightforward, but there are several strategies that can be employed to achieve this end. When experiencing difficulty initiating the process, consider the following techniques: begin with an anecdote, a quotation, an image, a question, or a startling fact to pique the reader’s interest. It may also be helpful to consider the five W’s of journalism: who, what, when, where, why, and how.   For instance, an anecdotal opening could be structured as follows: “As I ascended the stage, momentarily blinded by the intense lights, I could sense the weight of a hundred eyes upon me, anticipating my next move. The topic of discussion was climate change, a subject I was passionate about, and it was my first public speaking event. Little did I know , that pivotal moment would not only alter my perspective but also chart my life’s course.” 

Crafting a compelling thesis statement for your introduction paragraph is crucial to grab your reader’s attention. To achieve this, avoid using overused phrases such as “In this paper, I will write about” or “I will focus on” as they lack originality. Instead, strive to engage your reader by substantiating your stance or proposition with a “so what” clause. While writing your thesis statement, aim to be precise, succinct, and clear in conveying your main argument.  

To create an effective essay introduction, ensure it is clear, engaging, relevant, and contains a concise thesis statement. It should transition smoothly into the essay and be long enough to cover necessary points but not become overwhelming. Seek feedback from peers or instructors to assess its effectiveness. 

References  

  • Cui, L. (2022). Unit 6 Essay Introduction.  Building Academic Writing Skills . 
  • West, H., Malcolm, G., Keywood, S., & Hill, J. (2019). Writing a successful essay.  Journal of Geography in Higher Education ,  43 (4), 609-617. 
  • Beavers, M. E., Thoune, D. L., & McBeth, M. (2023). Bibliographic Essay: Reading, Researching, Teaching, and Writing with Hooks: A Queer Literacy Sponsorship. College English, 85(3), 230-242. 

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  1. How To Write a Book Introduction With Examples

    3. Highlight "what could be" and how. You want your reader to see "how it can be" if they apply the solution you offer them in your book. Now that you've convinced them you know the problem at least as well as they do, it's time to. Show your reader they're not stuck with "how it is" now.

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    What an Introduction Should Do. Get the reader immediately interested in the book. Clearly lay out the pain the reader is facing. Paint a picture of a better future or a benefit the reader can get. Outline briefly what the reader will learn in the book. Explain why the author is the expert and authority on this subject.

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    Step 3: Introduce Your Subject Matter. A good introduction is like a good sales pitch; it should provide the right amount of information to get others excited and motivated to invest. This means book introductions should be concise and informative while showcasing the work's subject matter.

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    3. Photo by Blaz Photo on Unsplash. Your book's introduction is your one shot to make a good first impression on readers. If the intro fails to capture and hold their attention, the rest of your ...

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    Use the introduction to make your case. You should probably count on writing a book introduction that ranges from 1,200 to 2,000 words. However, don't get hung up on the length. If you can create a compelling introduction, the length doesn't matter. Always focus on selling the book to your potential readers.

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    When properly crafted, a book introduction invites potential readers to invest in its content. Many nonfiction books begin with an introduction that previews their subject matter, structure, and core arguments. When properly crafted, a book introduction invites potential readers to invest in its content. ... Writing How to Write a Great Book ...

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    How Should You Start Your Book Introduction? As Kate Coe said, "All great books start with greatness." So, the best way to start your book introduction is to start great, if you want to have a ...

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    When you follow the three main steps for writing the best book introductions, you can: Instantly engage your ideal reader. Give them certainty that Yes, this book is for them. Expand on the promise in your book's title. Tell the reader why you're the person to deliver on that promise. Indicate how you plan to do so.

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    How Your Book's Intro Will Help You. How to Write the Book Introduction: 8 Steps. Step 1: Identify the Problem. Step 2: Present the Solution. Step 3: Assert Your Credibility. Step 4: Show Them the Benefits. Step 5: Give Them Proof. Step 6: Make a Promise (The Bigger the Better) Step 7: Warn Them Against Waiting.

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    Crafting a compelling, engaging introduction requires careful planning and execution. This comprehensive 3000+ word guide will walk you through the key elements of writing a stellar book introduction that grabs readers' attention. What is a Book Introduction? The introduction is the very first chapter of a book, preceding the first chapter.

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    1) Draw Your Readers In. The first paragraph in your book introduction is the most important one, because it must "hook" your readers into reading the entire section. One of the most powerful hooks is the power of the "story," because our brains are wired to be highly susceptible to them.

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    Dive into the book. 3 Fiction Book Introduction Examples. #1 - The Boy, the Mole, the Fox, and the Horse. #2 - The Last Operative. #3 - Fahrenheit 451. 3 Nonfiction Book Introduction Examples. #1 - Troubleshooting Your Novel. #2 - Marketing Made Simple. #3 - Bird By Bird.

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    This is exactly what a good introduction must include. It needs to convey that your book is useful. It must inspire readers to keep going. And, it must recognize and empathize with the audience. If you do those things well, readers will accept your invitation that you crafted specifically for them in the introduction and read your book.

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    In other words, your introduction is what convinces your readers to read the rest of your book. Fortuately, there's a formula to get this right — just five steps to write something that's ...

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    Writing a compelling hook takes skill. But you can use any of the following ways of writing a hook to get you started: 1. The Surprising Statistic Hook. Presenting a surprising fact or statistic is a great way to grab the attention of your audience. For example, an essay on the orphan crisis may begin with:

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    Metaphor: A website's blog pulls clients to the company like a magnet. Simile: A website's blog is like a magnet that attracts clients to the business. 6. The Description Hook. A vivid description of your scene is an ideal hook to draw your reader's attention. It may not be as easy as reading how to start an introduction.

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    Instead, focus on any words or ideas that are vital to the reader's understanding of the thesis. Write Your Introduction 1. A thesis statement emphasizes the main idea of your paper. The thesis statement consists of 1-2 sentences that detail what the paper is about. It is the statement that strings together all of the ideas in your body ...

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    7 Tips for Writing an Attention-Grabbing Hook. How do you get a reader interested in what you have to say? One technique is to use a great hook—an opening so exciting that it convinces a reader that your story is worth reading. How do you get a reader interested in what you have to say? One technique is to use a great hook—an opening so ...

  20. How to Write an Essay Introduction (with Examples)

    Here are the key takeaways for how to write essay introduction: 3. Hook the Reader: Start with an engaging hook to grab the reader's attention. This could be a compelling question, a surprising fact, a relevant quote, or an anecdote. Provide Background: Give a brief overview of the topic, setting the context and stage for the discussion.

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    Table of contents. Step 1: Hook your reader. Step 2: Give background information. Step 3: Present your thesis statement. Step 4: Map your essay's structure. Step 5: Check and revise. More examples of essay introductions. Other interesting articles. Frequently asked questions about the essay introduction.